Writing from a video

We have been inspired to write by looking at a thought-provoking photo (bully cat stories) but this time we watched a video and had to write a story about what we saw. Here is the video (some of you may know it) and here is Sofia's writing. Our writing goals were to use adjectives to add detail to our stories and to write about the experience from the iguana's point of view. Do you think Sofia has met these goals?