Day 1 of Distance Learning.

 Read these 2 pieces of writing from the picture prompt put up on our class site. 

   






This amazing piece of writing was by Louie. Look at the amazing vocabulary Louie used. The words evoke real emotion. You really feel for the poor kitten!






These 2 pieces of writing were by Sofia. I love how she has justified why Fat Cat acted as he did. It doesn't make what Fat Cat did any better but it makes me feel a little sorry for him. I love how Sofia ended her story. It made me feel happy. 


Charlie has written his story from a completely different perspective. Now I feel sorry for Greedy Cat!

 

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